Game description and rules:

There is a beginning of the story here already by the famous writer coffee (…)~. Anyone can follow it and writes no matter how many or few sentences to make the story going wherever you like! The characters fate is in your hands! You can save them when they were “executed” by other writers~, or punish them when they just felt high in the story world… All in all it’s you guys’ right to create this story, so just feel free to join! You could also rejoin at any time when you want to “save” your favorite dramatis personae, but don’t keep writing till the end…LOL. The story will and must be ended at the 25th-30th pages, so anyone there just give the character his final show and make the story have an acceptable ending~ After that I would collect the whole story up and publish it on the official website! And we would have a hot vote for the most literary talented writer, the most trouble-making writer, the most hardworking and lazy writer…during the story making, LOL~ a celeb list with your name would be posted on the forum~ So anyone who’s longing for the eternal glory just rock the story up now! PS: Any reply not related to the story-making would be deleted, so focus~

OK,let me start the game:It's been my 4th year on the green planet. With my robot Megaton I've destroyed thousands of enemy machines. However I couldn't stop missing my home earth, my mom and sister everyday. I left them on mission in a hurry…
"Are you Captain Jack Sparrow?" A girl's voice suddenly pulled me back from the galaxy outside the window……(to be continued)

Last edited by coffee on 05-23-2008 at 06:26:33 PM.

Have fun here!

"Yes, I share the name of a famous Pirate of my home planet, although he is now long dead." I replied.
She looked at me oddly, as if she was trying to remember a face.

"Yes... You look just like him, perhaps you can help me with something, your units look strong enough, but, what is your true power level?" She had just scanned my units and clearly indentified that I had a potency hide auxilary programme.
I decided to tell her my true Potency as I was interested at what she might propose.

"Well, my unit's have a combined potency of 1892, am I suitable for your task?"

"Yes, most certaintly, at your power you should be able to finish this quest. Oh, my name is Alicia, this is just an alias, I'm sorry but I cannot reveal my true name at this time."

To be continued.




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Ermm, it's meant to be one big story, can you write so that your part of the story takes into effect what happened in posts made by others?

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Meanwhile at another part of the galaxy, a new pilot born into the world of zero universe, traveling through pilot registration and mech selection before being teleport to a mass base of mech. His name is Timmy. When he first step into the Alliance's last base, the SteelWarship, people greet him with "hey there noob", "i'll kill you noob" etc. Timmy feel so confuse and sad deep inside.

Timmy was alone in the dark side of the ship when someone pass by and say some nice word "Hi there, whats u doing here? U are new is it? From earth?". Timmy stand up and reply nicely "Hi, yes i am new here..and i donno what to do where to go so i sit here watching all those big glowing mech going pass me." "oh yeah i am from earth". After that, the unknown pilot offer Timmy a trade, and as Timmy agree, he give Timmy 2mil Gold which delighting Timmy so much. "there are still a good person here at least. i will be good man too someday".

Chatting continue, unknown person "why u become a pilot then?" Timmy reply while both sitting at the conner "well, im just here to help Alliace to fight those alien. i have nowhere to go, nobody to care as they all died from an alien attack. so i am here as i though of helping abit of the fighting" Timmy continue " i see u are strong, how long u been here?" the man reply " well, since the call for volunteer is made. i am just a normal
guy." some more chatting continues, and Timmy finally feel good about joining the call for voluteer mech fighter again the alien forces.

After being told by the unknown man to meet Instructor Hudson to begin the training, Timmy begin his training by following instruction given by Instructor Hudson that contain in the Hudson Navigator device. Timmy progress level by level in training and soon his mech is at level 20 and entitle for the first evolution of his mech. Timmy was so happy with his performance and train some more.

Now, Timmy at level 60 and finish his second evolution for his mech. Timmy was so happy with his progress. While walking in SteelWarship, Timmy pass by the place where the unknown man sit with him when he first started. Immedietly, Timmy shock his head and think "who is that man? i even forgot to ask his name..lol, silly me".

to be continue--->

I'm going to make Timmy and Jack meet up eventually, so if you want to continue one character do as I have done below and define what character your switching to, do this for any new characters you make aswell.

-Back to the Jack, Dialog starts with Alicia-
"A great threat is looming, I know that only you and a new pilot who was born recently"
"Hey, what is this about, why would I need help from some weak low level?"
"You will see in time, but, both of you are needed to finally wipe out the Othello menace"
"You expect me to believe that the two of us alone can destory what the whole alliance cannot?"
"You will see, it is mearly my duty to inform you of this quest, as it is my duty to tell you the pilot who you must meet, give him this gold to help him out and wait untill he reaches level 130 before you approach him again, do not tell him your name at the first meeting"

And with that Jack warped to steelwarship and seen a confused pilot wandering around in his unit, after scanning and seeing that he was indeed Timmy, he handed the Gold to him.

To be continued (sorry for writing so much, got carried away).


Last edited by Timmy on 05-23-2008 at 04:05:14 AM.

Dudes..u guys r really rock writer~~so much, it hurts my eyes~ Anyway I finish reading, not bad.LOL just don't put alot at a time. I've just seen the same event in EO forum, they'r doing quite good i think~ OK time for my show...

A week had passed and Timmy was still searching for the stranger who gave him great help. He still remembered his robot, a very strong and powerful artillery type with splendid machine gun. "He should be famous in this base and not hard to find." Timmy thought. And at the same time he didn't forget this grandma's letter, "Find Alica she is the daughter of General Legoz, my old friend.She will introduce you to the army..." He picked the photo of Alica from the letter."She's so beautiful..." Timmy said to himself. Just the moment a sense of sweet-smelling float by and girl passed him. "Captain Jack, our mission is about to start. Be prepared!"She shouted to a strong man.
"...Alica?" Timmy tried to call.
The girl got surprised and turned around,"...Who are you?"

"Oh, isn't this the boy I gave gold to?" The strong man walk to Timmy. Then Timmy just realized the huge artillery type robot behind the man.....

to be continued

PS: love~ dont forget the title ! 2 man and a girl...hoho

What is Zero? It's a math puzzle or a game battle. The answer depends on your PC or your potency...

Let's me try my best on this

"Excuse me, sir?" asked Timmy.
"You don't remember the guy gave you the gold last week?" reminded the man.
"Yes, i still remember that but i am not sure that man was you becuase there are a lot of similiar looking units here..." replied Timmy.
"At least you can still remember the Potency i got here in my unit." sayed the man.
"Well sorry...i didn't scan your unit...but i do still remember that strong and powerful artillery type with splendid machine gun. But since you talk about the gold i can slightly believe you are that man who gave the gold to me" replied Timmy.
"Well sorry for have to stop you guys' conversation but we have a big situation here." interupted Alica.

To be continued.

"I see, so the time is now then, Alicia..?"
"Yes, We must leave soon-"
"Sorry, but, what is this all about, and why am I involved?"
"Should I tell him now"
"Yes, it's best you do, so that he knows he is risking his life"
"Afew weeks ago Alicia gave me that gold I gave you and told me to keep an eye on you, together us 3 are meant to meet a client who will help us bring about the downfall of Othello, she should be at green planet right now"
"How could I be of assistance to you, surely you alone could finish this quest?"
"No, you hold the key to a powerful weapon, one that can easily quench the Othello menace, but that is all we know, we must find the client now, she will tell us more".

While on the journey to Green Planet, Timmy glance back to the progress he made in 1 week before. Timmy smile to himself out of his leveling progress and also able to find the friendly person that was so nice to him when he first start.

Training after level 60 is much harder, Timmy remember killing hundreds and thousands of alien monsters. He even join some SpaceMission to help Alliance ambush enemy base even though he barely able to kill a monster during the mission. All that matter to Timmy during that time is getting his mech stronger and better..to put an end to all those alien once and for all..the goal that Timmy remind himself repeatedly.

He remember so well when he got new ARM as soon as he finish evolving his main mech. It was a good to have new ARM which give more POT to his mech in total, which Timmy realized is the main power/key factor to fight again alien monster.

Timmy has advance so much in his course to become a good pilot. His mech also equipped with full elite part that was loot from dead alien's body that he killed. Some are bought from the market with his gold plus the help of the initial 2mil gold he got from Jack, or Alice.."Alice/Alica/Alicia? it doesn't matter" whisper Timmy. "they are so nice. that gold they gave me help me a lot during my training".

"Now, i am quite strong at level 133 on main mech and 122 on ARM, i am in a group of good people that have the same course as me, all i have to do is listen to them and beleive them. they are here long before me..i will do what ever it take" conclude Timmy with high determination as they are nearly arrive at Green Planet.

to be continue..

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The inticipation of the quest to come was overwhelming Timmy. He ran ahead of Jack and Alicia gunning down various Othello, Warbots, Drillbots and their bosses.
Watching him Jack relized that Timmy was a key factor to their quest not just because of his hidden power but because of his energetic attitude, being of high potency Jack himself was always gloomy and bored, being in such a state of mind in battle is never good.

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Seeing Timmy in battle,Jack remembered the time when he was still a fresh pilot and his potency was still low...He was very energetic and daring in all the missions that he has taken. He was the friend of everybody...but now,with his potency very high...many people enemied him and tried to destroy his MECH..but all of them failed...

Alicia,meanwhile was just observing the new pilot,Timmy.

"He will be the only key to the destruction of Othello,he has to be or all of the universe will be doomed!"she said to herself.

In Green planet,they team up to train Timmy...with Jack as the leader to create a double experience for Timmy to train fast...which of course Jack bought those from the Crystal shop.

"We have no time."Jack said.
"You should level up faster Timmy..."he said to himself while watching Timmy crush a bunch of Firewalkers using his Over Drive.

Timmy was indeed getting better...until...thier communication was disconnected...Jack and Alicia lost signal due to some technical interferrence from Othello's hackers.

"What the hell happend?"Timmy shouted while driving his MECH to the corner to avoid the Firewalkers."Hey guys,are you ok?"..."Hello..??"..."Jack?...Alicia?"....

This is definitely not good...something is wrong...guys,come back..i can't do this alone..."

to be continued..

Jimmy tried to find out what happened to the signal. He asked his Battle AI in his unit for the situation...
"AI! what happened?! i can't cummunicate with my team! report now!" commanded Jimmy.
"Sir, the signal is lost due to some technical interferrence from Othello's hackers." answered battle AI.
"Damn the othello...what can i do now? wait?!" asked Jimmy.
"I suggest get out of the battle first then i can working on the situation." answered battle AI.
"But the enemies are too strong. what can i do to break through?" asked Jimmy.
"Over Drive is the key." answered battle AI.
"Try to use thruster to move faster and use Over Drive to break through the enemies." added battle AI.
"Ok, let's see...here we go!" shouted Jimmy.

With the incredible speed, he broke through the enimies and got hyper experience. But something looked very big standed on his way out of the battle. He identified the object...it's a boss!

To be continue...

It's Timmy, not Jimmy xD
The boss moved in whie he ordered more FireWalkers to close in. Now cornered by FireWalkers on all sides, his death was immident.
He watched his life flash befoe his eyes.
"No... I can't die, I hold the key to save everyone, I can't die..!"
Without his overdrive at an end the FireWalkers closed in, the end was soon.
"I will not die."
And with that a powerful light erupted from his mech crushing all the FireWalkers and decimating the boss, a small Blue Star was lying on the floor, quickly grabbing it he claimed his prize.
When the light cleared he seen Alicia and Jack standing there awestruck at such power.
"H-he destroyed a boss t-that was Amazing!"
To be Continued.

Last edited by Timmy on 05-24-2008 at 04:04:45 PM.

Timmy's Mech was almost crushed due to the incident...his AI signaled "Repair Gears" on all his inner and outer gears.

Then.....he got unconscious...his mind went blur...slowly fading..fading...

"Alicia!"shouted Jack.
"Get Timmy out of here!Hurry!...i smell something coming (sniffs)...hmmmmm...it can't be....it can't be..."

Alicia immediately took Timmy's MECH and by using the Steel Warship teleporter they warped and got into Steel Warship in no time..

"What could that be?"asked Alicia to herself.
"What is he talking about?"...

Meanwhile,still in Green Planet,Jack is entangled with a Heavy Unit...he was in front of a huge MECH armed with a Heavy sword in its maxed level...Potency 2000,all gears Ultra,they call him THE DON.

Jack was amazed by the sight and at the same time a little nervous.It was the first time they met one on one.

"Ahhh...Ummm...S-sir.."Jack almost twisted his tongue.
"W-hat is it S-sir?"....

"Hmmmmm...Did you kill the BerserkerLord?"THE DON answered.

"N-no sir" Jack said.
"It was killed by another pilot...Potency 600+"

"Are you kidding me son?"said THE DON laughing.

"No Sir...im serious"Jack replied.

"But how?Damn...it couldn't be the one that i always hear of from other pilots...about a boy who hold s the KEY blah blah blah...?"Replied THE DON.

"Well,it is he sir....my Apprentice..Timmy!"said Jack with pride.

"Hahahaha...well Son...if its really true...ill have to see about that...next time ill watch him train and maybe help you train him...hehehehe..."

THE DON left using his navigator.

Jack was very happy with what he heard from THE DON.It was indeed a big help.He immediately went to Steel Warship to check on Timmy.He was fine.

"Thank God youre ok Timmy" Jack said.
"What happened back there Jack?"Timmy asked.
"Well,you just killed a Boss young man!"Jack happily replied.

"Oh my God!!Alicia,tell me its not true....tell me!!"shouted Timmy

"Its true Timmy,you did it for the first time!"Alicia smiled at him.

"WoW!What should i do with the Blue star i got?"Timmy asked.

Jack and Alicia looked at each other and somehow got their minds one.They smiled...

"Well Timmy,let's make your gear quality up!It's time i guess."Jack said while looking at Alicia nodding.

"How?"Timmy cried.

"Let's go.Follow me"Jack said.

They now went to the "Gear Quality Academy" and Jack instructed Timmy what to do in there.

"Yes Sir!Ill try my luck!"Timmy shouted.

"Go young man!Let your luck and confidence guide you and always remember to stay focused,try to sense the lucky power that you have and let your instinct follow..Go!go!"said Jack .

Timmy repaired his WEAPON...put it inside the GEAR QUALITY UP capsule....then put the blue star in the module.....and pressed the button.......

to be continued....

On the opening on the capsule a bright glow emitted, the Blue Star had succeeded in it's job, Timmy got his first Ultra.
"I-it worked!" snatching up his new heavy sword at the same time.
"Congratsulations young pilot, may the Alliance guide you to further improve your gear again in the near future"
"T-thank you s-sir"
"Nice, it worked, now you'll be much stronger Timmy!"
"Thanks Jack, weren't we at Green Planet to meet a someone though?"
"Oh-no! She'll be there any minute, Jack, Timmy, take one of these and use them"
Alicia handed both Jack and Timmy a Green Planet navigator which they both used.
To Be Continued.

Sorry for using the wrong name lol
Jack should be more rough becuase he is the brave pilot.
Timmy and Jack got their way back to Green Planet.
"well, here we are." sighed Jack.
"uh...do we need to fight again or what? you say you want me to meet up somebody right?" asked Timmy.
"nope we won't fight with those fools right now but we will in future. of course when you became a superior pilot."sayed Jack.
"then i will try my best on trainning!" shouted Timmy.
Jack led Timmy to the Don's commanding station. They asked a soldier around there to lead them to the commander.
"so this is the pilot just killed the BerserkerLord?" wondred the commander.
"yes, he is." replied Jack.
"nice to meet you, sir my name is Timmy, one of the Jack's apperance" greeted Timmy.
"my name is Horus Christopher who you can call Horus and nice to meet you." greeted Horus.
"hmm...you got a ultra sword don't ya...i can see on your mech." added Horus.
"yes i used the blue star i got from that boss to upgrade the sword." sayed Timmy.
"but i am not happy with your level and pot. You could use a lot of help from us. you can work near the Depot of ours to level up and find some elites if you lucky." sayed Horus.
"and of course some meteors to help level up your gears." added Horus.
"yes, sir. thank you sir." excited Timmy.
"i might help you a little on trianning. So just wait becuase i got a lot of work on here with othello." sayed Horus.
"yes, sir" eccepted Timmy.
"sighs...now let's make our work begin shall we?" asked Jack.
"wait...i got osmething...oh, it's from Alicia, she wants me to come to her for a quick. Maybe fixing stuff again. I will be right back but will take time. Good luck Timmy." sayed Jack.
"ok! guess i have to work alone. But everything will ok with the Don" force around here. See you again Jack." sayed Timmy.
They aparted and Timmy began to find out soething new in his mech and his ability.

To be continue...

I got my excitement on the event so don't mind if i post 2 posts. thank you.

Timmy met the depot's officer who Horus told Timmy to meet him. His name is Josh. he was finghting for the Alliance for a long time ago. But then he retired.
"Hey josh, i want you to meet this newbie. His name is Timmy. please be nice to him as we always to the Don." offered Horus.
"please to meet you." greeted Timmy.
"please to meet and see you son. oh wait i have heard you killed the berserkerlord, right? nice goal up there son." amazed Josh.
"well you are too kind." sayed Timmy.
"i will be more kind if you work hard like i did in the Alliance...i miss my fleet up there...i don't know how they been." sayed Josh.
"you joined the Alliance force before?" asked Timmy.
"yes...but i will tell you something happened in the Alliance. But first! prove yourself worthy. Then we will speak." ordered Josh.
"yes sir!" eccpeted Timmy.
"the Alliance got a big trouble before? i never know that..." though Timmy.
He eccpeted some criminal assassinations from Josh. He then got a good record to the Don force. He kept on collecting stuff and take exp rewards and gold also. Until he realized that Jack didn't even return for like 2 days...
"something wrong...i should ask Alicia hope she still online."though Timmy.
"alicia?...hello? hello?! anybody there?!" shouted Timmy.
"it looks like she can't pick your call now, sir." noticed Battle AI.
"are you sure about this? she would always pick up my message liek she said before...unless..." wondered Timmy.
"sent me to Jack!" ordered Timmy.
"please wait...none...signal lost dued to the owner cut the signal for anti-scout." sayed battle AI.
"not good they are in a big situation and for me i am staying here and do nothing but annoying them! i...got to help them! AI! nevigate me to...wait..." sayed Timmy.
He then though about Josh's words at the time they met up each other: "something worng happened in the Alliance..."
then he though about Josh's fleet should be connected somehow with the Alliance.
"i should ask Josh before i act. So i won't gone on the wrong path without thinking." decided Timmy.
He get out of the battle he as in and quickly ran back the Depot.
"hey what's up? how is it..." asked Josh.
"can you tell me what happened in the Alliance and your fleet?" interupted Timmy.
"well...since you are..."thinking Josh.
"please!" shouted Timmy.
"ok kid hang in there...exactly the Alliance seeked for a artifact...50 years ago." sayed Josh.
"artifact?" questioned Timmy.
"yes the artifact which held all the power to conquer all the universe. The Alliance though about it...they seeked for it for years now...or maybe centuries...i don't know when the news started but it was a long time ago." sayed josh.
"then your fleet? what happened?" asked Timmy.
"you see i was not work for the Alliance...i worked for the othello but i sqied the Alliance and got this news from them." sayed softly Josh.
"no...you work for the Alliance! you traitor!" shouted Timmy.
"wait! let's me explain..." offred Josh.
Timmy pointed his sword directly to Josh.
"then speak the truth..." ordered Timmy.
"i will but fisrt i retired of the othello and Alliance 20 years ago. So you should trust me that i am working to nobody but the Don." sayed Josh.
"you got my mind...now speak what happened." ordered Timmy as he put down his sword.
"here it is...but don't tell anybody...ever!...listen..." sayed Josh.

To be continued...

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