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Once upon a time, there was a fifteen year old girl named Aneleasa who lived in a small cottage that overlooked the whole city of Paris, France. What Aneleasa wanted more than anything in the world was to get married and find love. When Aneleasa finaly met her true love her parents made her move to the huge city of Rome. ............................................................ When Aneleasa arrived in Rome her parents sent her to a Catholic all girls High School where everyone was stuck up and rude. One day when Aneleasa was wandering the streets of Rome,she was forcefully hit my a tall handsome man on his way home from school. When they got up the man said," Hello,how are you, my name is Epimetheus," and smiled. Aneleasa said", Bonjour, comment allez-vous, ca va bien, merci, mon nomest Aneleasa." The man then looked confused and Aneleasa realized that he didnt speak French. Then Aneleasa explained that she just moved from France to Rome. The man understood, and new that he had finaly found his true love, the problem was, he didnt know if she felt the same way. The man soon asked Aneleasa if she wanted him to walk her home. Aneleasa replied with a yes. Through what Aneleasa observed she knew that Epimetheus was tall and handsome, and had beautiful green eyes. When they arrived home Epimetheus asked Aneleasa if she could meet him at the cafe' in the morning. Aneleasa said yes and then went to bed. Aneleasas parents, however, did not like their daughter to fall in love, and therefore could not find out about Epimetheus. ............................................................ So in the morning Aneleasa snuck out of the house to head to the cafe'. There, Epimetheus was waiting. After they ate lunch they decided to go ice-skating. As they arived at the ring Aneleasa had to go to the bathroom. When she went she never returned. Epimetheus saw someone take her and leave in a van. Epimetheus then new that he had to save her. So, he followed the van on his mo-ped and ended up at a junk yard. So he hid behind tall piles so no one could see him. Soon after, Aneleasa and the guy went into a little building, so then Epimtheus followed. ............................................................ Aneleasa knew that Epimetheus was her true love and therefore she would never see him again and had to find a way to escape. Once the man turned around she grabbed a knife and stabbed the man, unfortunently he was wearing a protective suit and the stab did nothing. Before Aneleasa knew it she was being carried into a small closet where she was locked up. After, a bit, she heard fighting and yelling, and knew it was Epimetheus coming to save her. Epimtheus took the knife and stabbed the bad man (realy hard) and then unlocked Aneleasa from the closet where she was scared and afraid. Epimetheus told Aneleasa that she was his true love and that he wanted to be with her forever. Aneleasa said the same and told Epimetheus that they needed to run away because she knew if they didnt her parents would move her again. Aneleasa was seventeen at the time and there for capable of taking care of herself. So that night Epimetheus and Aneleasa raced through the wind and stroled off into the large city of Rome to start there new beginning. ............................................................ Soon they entered Switzerland and found a small cottage where they chose to live. By this time Epimetheus learned french and Aneleasa learned to ride horses and cook, (beofre she couldnt cook an egg wihtout burning it). Aneleasa became a doctor along wiht her husband, and they all lived happily ever after, until, one day Aneleasa was captured by a man named Jouck Havlay from France. Aneleasa was on her deathbead until she was rescued, again, by Epimetheus, as they tired escaped they were both locked in a dungeon, where they were sentenced to death. Epimetheous and Aneleasa new that love overpowered everything and that if there love was stong enough they would survive, so as the time came for their lives to end Aneleasa and Epimetheous grabbed hands and said, "May the power of love last forever and may our love be true and just." Just like that they were lifted up and survived. Epimetheus told Aneleasa that she should realy stay out of trouble. They both laughfed and then new that true love could withstand anything.
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like my pic. Last edited by carebare on 02-23-2009 at 02:50:28 PM.
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HI plzz vote i mad this form my heart
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that was a great story and i know an aneleasa in crazy tao
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thx girchick u r kind
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Hi Welcome~ Please dont double post, just use edit button to modify~ And your picture is not uploaded successfully~

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hi, what do u mean my pictures werent uploaded correctly?what do u mean plz dotn double post? Last edited by carebare on 02-23-2009 at 02:51:44 PM.
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nice story
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hey aneleasa_1 its me youko
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that was a great story
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oh realy what lvl is this char of yours
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Quote: Originally Posted by carebare hi, what do u mean my pictures werent uploaded correctly?what do u mean plz dotn double post? [color=red]Last edited by carebare on 02-23-2009 at 02:51:44 PM.[/colo ... Please read the forum rule first~

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okay coffe i read it but when i click delete for all those extra posts it deletes the message but the post stays there
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Yeah it is, dont worry~

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kk thx just wondering but r u a girl or a boy? can u tel me what else i need to do to improve the story? Last edited by carebare on 02-24-2009 at 02:29:32 PM.
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